January 28, 2015

  • She's Got the Beat

    she's got the beat
    take the heat and
    go meet her be
    sweet to her she's
    gonna be oh
    so free wait and
    see let her lead
    meet her need don't
    exceed her or
    plead with her for things she isn't giving up

Comments (2)

  • This reminds me of a Than Bauk. Nice chain rhyme!

  • that is what it is. learned about Than Bauk a couple of years ago. I like writing them. there are a couple of other forms that are similar to this one to be found throughout SE Asia.

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