April 19, 2013
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National Poetry Day - day 20.1
to the ocean
a burdened soul
driven; the blues,
much valued, will
rescue her heart
then depart on
the art of the fading sun
to the ocean
a burdened soul
driven; the blues,
much valued, will
rescue her heart
then depart on
the art of the fading sun
Comments (2)
Short and sweet. Nicely done. I am seeing more short poems that are quite good in Xanga.
frank
@HUMOR_ME_NOW - Thank you for the comment. Since November I have been focusing on short poetry. Shadorma and tanka were my primary forms, but avoiding haiku as it is one form where I am weak. Since then I have added a number of other forms to my stylebook. And I have a number of other forms I need to try out. I hope to share them before the end of the month. Let's see what happens next...
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